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Death form crux Span from womb to tomb. Still shrugging. For your sake It's time to muse, act shrewdly. Who can read your yarn
Written: January 08, 2022

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Date: 1/8/2022 1:47:00 PM
Life ends in material death but our souls remain alive.
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Date: 1/8/2022 8:10:00 AM
Nice Shadorma. Felt religious, spiritual. syllable count in the 3rd line 2, should be 3 i suppose? Thanks - Marshall
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Date: 1/8/2022 8:42:00 AM
Your intelligent observation, as well as the correction, are very appreciated. You are correct that it is just two syllables, and I have made the necessary corrections.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things