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The Last Swing

Death form crux Span from womb to tomb. Still shrugging. For your sake It's time to muse, act shrewdly. Who can read your yarn
Written: January 08, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Life ends in material death but our souls remain alive.
Ahmed Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Nice Shadorma. Felt religious, spiritual. syllable count in the 3rd line 2, should be 3 i suppose? Thanks - Marshall
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Your intelligent observation, as well as the correction, are very appreciated. You are correct that it is just two syllables, and I have made the necessary corrections.
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