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Have I?
Captured you?
Rapture’d you?
I stare at you
The moon at my back
Wine dripping as blood
Life dripping from your soul
My red hair shines and glows
My Naughty thoughts so sublime
I will devour you
I will make you
Make you be who you are
Make you howl like a wolf in the night
Pleasures as you have never known
Caressing upon your chest
My love, we have no time at all to rest
In peace, just yet
Do you see me, full of your essence?
I smile at our fate of the evening time
I know in the end
All the pleasure I bring to you
You oh great love will return ten fold
I will moan like a satisfied feline
We have accomplished what our tribes said was not
Allowed or possible
Hold me dear
Hold me forever
As we plunge
Together in the depths of love
And leave this world
Forever

Notes: This poem was all over the map, and finally I molded it after the famous Romeo and Juliet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2015 7:17:00 PM
Captivating, passionate and fatal!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2015 10:37:00 AM
really excellent pen arthur love how you drew this from a classic top shelf piece pal
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you liam, much appreciated!
Date: 3/9/2015 6:40:00 PM
Love the new take on Romeo and Juliet...awe inspiring
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Tim!
Date: 3/9/2015 4:49:00 PM
Kind of vampirish one!! At least if I go by the title. but I can also see it as the Romeo and Juliet story. Passionate!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
I twisted this one a wee bit! :)
Date: 3/9/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this tremendous poem,and thank you for your lovely comment on my poem,much appreciated
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
Most welcome Fatima
Date: 3/9/2015 6:41:00 AM
Hotness,loveness and lustiness all combined together. To make magic like your words:-).
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:20:00 PM
As I do yours
Date: 3/9/2015 1:35:00 AM
I love the flavor this poem gives to the senses Arthur. Your poem far outshines the pictures. It is an occult delight, chilling and yet fulfilling. Bravo! 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:19:00 PM
You Connie are so kind!

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