The Last Summer Bikini Tan Lines

The last Bikini Tan lines of summer
Fades like autumn leaves and fall colors 
As it's being blown away
By the western Isle of Scotland winds
Now it’s time for Halloween
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellison Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Autumn, although beautiful, has always been a sad time for me! Will miss those bikini clad ladies! LOL
Lander Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 5:31 AM
i know, oh how i long for the summer days.. i am a Island Gal..
Horsman Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Well Annie, this is different, and it's a beautiful poem, love how you combine the tan of summer with the winds of the western Isle...
Lander Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Thank you so much Harry, as you know next month is Halloween month no more exposure to the sun, it all about covering up from the harsh winds either the Scotland winds of the Eastern winds one love annie L
O'Leary Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:05 AM
You're right! But I still prefer being enthralled by the tan, and not thralled by the Bogeyman... Great Poem... Terry
Lander Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Terry O'Leary my Irish eyes
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