The Last Semblance of Sanity

Paraded endlessly, this spectacle the Elephants know to be degrading,
And their counterparts from the sea , the Orcas, resist in captivity
By refusing to unfurl their proud dorsal fin, stings my eyes like a gnat
Lodged in my cortex, no amount of profit seems to dislodge.

Waking from my dream, I notice the old man waving to the crowd,
Gesturing wildly, as if warning of something no-one has yet seen.
Every evolution of Plybinium Quasar, the spectacle increases, with
Dogs leaping and biting at the air, and Neptunes, of disproportionate
Size, unable (or unwilling) to allow the pain to subside.

The viewing platform, constructed entirely of entitlements, teeters
Vicariously in the breeze, with the prominent attendees smiling, despite
Frostbite, inching up their extended promises.

Utilizing “light-track” technology, the time hoppers applaud
At pre-determined intervals, a strenuous exercise for sure,
Given the time restraints imposed by the counters in the Humbolt Quasar.

In this unfamiliar atmosphere, what clean air there is left to breathe
Smells pretty bad, like a cake frosted with sulfur.



01/10/11
9:46 pm
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August 4, 2011 at 8:19 PM
A real meal to read here Jamie I've missed your input and real happy to see all 3 of your entrys movin on up...I just wrote an Irish piece with a brogue you might like ;) Congrad's Light & Love
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August 2, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations James on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Congrats James on this social statement being featured. The working man just can't win. Vince
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July 11, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Congrats on this selection, this social criticism? Love, daver
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July 10, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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January 12, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Interesting work that you have presented..Good luck in the contest if an entry...Your presence at my work delighted me this cold January morn...Sara
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January 10, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Hello, James! a very brilliant poem. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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