The Last Rose

9-26-20 A Night of Passion and Desire
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…The Last Rose…

Love, like the last delicate petals of a budding rose,
Kiss me - wake me from my grey midnight dreaming,
Hold me before the first light of the day transposes
The breath of moonlight’s silver shadows teeming.

Tenderly, as the soft color of the rose, caress me
Brush away the thorns protecting my soft heart;
Cast off this spiny sheath of tears so I may see
Blossoms open – ecstasy you impart.

Embraces from the fragile rose fire ignite me
In the elegance of cherished vanishing blooms
Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds
Rejoice for these last moments in the rose’s womb.

Then like the fragrance lingering in this fading rose,
Like the rapture tinged with love’s perfume
Leave your scent in a perfumed afterglow
And slowly fade into the morning gloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gaul Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Sam, this is a sensuous, lovely rhyme so well crafted. Certainly deserving of your high placement. In the early stanzas, I sense a lyric quality. Just sayin'. Congratulations.
Dutta Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 8:26 PM
Congrats to win first place. I admire each line. Blessing
Watt Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Another first place! Selected to the All-Star team! Well done and hearty congrats for your award-winning roses ~ John
Dubey Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations on your win and I agree there is something really magical when you relate flowers and romance.
Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Ah, once again Sam, your poetry is a thief that steals away with my breath.. I had to read the original poem from which the "Fragile Rose" came and my heart and imagination swooned within your luscious imagery lush with romance. A metaphorical beauty! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Watt Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 4:38 PM
Sam, this is as tender as a delicate rose petal and subtle as the moons silver shadows. The elegance, beauty, fragrance and fragility of the rose make a perfect metaphor for your writing of love's rapture. A big, smiling congratulations for your 1st place finish - MVP! ~ John
Evans Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Congrats on your win. Delicately done.
Ajmal Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:19 PM
It was a very beautiful poem and a joy to read, many congratulations on your top win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Mcintosh Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 6:21 AM
A beautiful inspiration in verse... Enjoyed this. God bless you and best wishes for a win, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Hi Gina! Roses seem to bring out our romantic side! So happy you enjoyed this verse. Grateful for the best wishes. Always grateful for the blessings my friend. Sending you a harvest of blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:26 PM
A lovely poem...so romantic
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Have been working with the roses in my rose garden. They were the inspiration!
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