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The Last Rose

…The Last Rose… Love, like the last delicate petals of a budding rose, Kiss me - wake me from my grey midnight dreaming, Hold me before the first light of the day transposes The breath of moonlight’s silver shadows teeming. Tenderly as the soft color of the rose caress me Brush away the thorns protecting my soft heart; Cast off this spiny sheath of tears so I may see Blossoms open – ecstasy you impart. Embraces like the fragile rose fire ignite me In the elegance of cherished vanishing blooms Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds Rejoice for these last moments in the rose’s womb. Then like the fragrance lingering in this fading rose, Like the rapture tinged with love’s perfume Leave your scent in a perfumed afterglow And slowly fade into the morning gloom. 9-26-20 Contest: A Night of Passion and Desire

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Date: 2/2/2021 7:43:00 AM
Sam, this is a sensuous, lovely rhyme so well crafted. Certainly deserving of your high placement. In the early stanzas, I sense a lyric quality. Just sayin'. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/31/2021 8:26:00 PM
Congrats to win first place. I admire each line. Blessing
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:33:00 PM
Another first place! Selected to the All-Star team! Well done and hearty congrats for your award-winning roses ~ John
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Date: 10/13/2020 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and I agree there is something really magical when you relate flowers and romance.
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Date: 10/12/2020 8:15:00 AM
Ah, once again Sam, your poetry is a thief that steals away with my breath.. I had to read the original poem from which the "Fragile Rose" came and my heart and imagination swooned within your luscious imagery lush with romance. A metaphorical beauty! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/10/2020 4:38:00 PM
Sam, this is as tender as a delicate rose petal and subtle as the moons silver shadows. The elegance, beauty, fragrance and fragility of the rose make a perfect metaphor for your writing of love's rapture. A big, smiling congratulations for your 1st place finish - MVP! ~ John
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Date: 10/10/2020 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Delicately done.
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Date: 10/10/2020 12:19:00 PM
It was a very beautiful poem and a joy to read, many congratulations on your top win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 9/25/2020 6:21:00 AM
A beautiful inspiration in verse... Enjoyed this. God bless you and best wishes for a win, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/5/2020 3:03:00 PM
Hi Gina! Roses seem to bring out our romantic side! So happy you enjoyed this verse. Grateful for the best wishes. Always grateful for the blessings my friend. Sending you a harvest of blessings!
Date: 9/23/2020 6:26:00 PM
A lovely poem...so romantic
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/5/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Have been working with the roses in my rose garden. They were the inspiration!

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