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The Last Ride

When in a coffin young man lay as a whole and then to satisfy curiosity,i ask What is body and where is soul? But to burry him deep is the next task The last Gathering to see the splendours of dead man and then again,slowly i ask in the heart what is fame and where is the name? Sooner from the eyes he has to depart The tears and screams will dissolve in the time and then something last,i have to ask What is your's and where is mine? it is the moment that burns the mask Death indeed has swallowed his pride How stupendous yet painful is his last ride 12-05-2023 For Sonnet poetry contest Sponsor:sotto poet

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Date: 6/12/2023 10:49:00 AM
This piece is truly remarkable and commands great power. I extend my warmest congratulations for your well-deserved Win.
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Aamy Khan
Date: 6/14/2023 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much sir. Loads of respect and love
Date: 6/2/2023 7:08:00 AM
A very exquisite piece of work sir, I extremely admire the sonnet.
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Aamy Khan
Date: 6/4/2023 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much vineeth.abundant blessings
Date: 5/16/2023 6:23:00 PM
Great work . No doubt life is fleeting and we will everything behind. From Him we are and to Him we will return.
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Aamy Khan
Date: 5/17/2023 7:42:00 AM
Indeed!Thanks alot sabahat

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