Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: This verse poem is our second portrait look at this very compelling theme on "The Last Red Rose of Autumn," from a specific descriptive perspective as part of Mother Nature's annual promise that  after Winter, "newborn red roses" shall once again return during the Spring-Summer time frame and captivate us with their full redolence and true beauty. (Gary Bateman - November 24, 2018)

Thematic Categories: allegory, beauty, destiny, farewell, image, nature, and symbolism.

The Last Red Rose of Autumn - Second Portrait

The Last Red Rose of Autumn – Second Portrait

The promise of Mother Nature
to come back
after a deep Winter's sleep
under thick white covers
green leaves
colorful blossoms
humming bees
singing birds
in between
newborn red roses
full redolence and true beauty.

Gary Bateman and Ingrid Krukenberg-Bateman
A Collaborated Poem
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – November 24, 2018
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Sands Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Wonderful. I was going to say on the last poem (until we see it again) and you have continued it. Very nice :)
Bateman Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:02 AM
Hello Dear Heidi, Thanks again for your read here!! Yes, this was a technique my wife had proposed with the concept of a second portrait. (We did this once before in an Imagism poem a couple of months ago where we decided to do a second poem as companion poem to the first one that had a complimentary view to the first one, but approached the theme from another perspective.) Cheers and Best!! Gary
Cunningham Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Spring returns bringing the rebirth of the beauty that has been away far too long. Tom.
Bateman Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Hello Tom, Thanks for your read and comment!! You are spot-on for sure with what you say. And wouldn't you know it, Winter is already making its presence known. Cheers and Best, Gary
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