Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Rhyme

The Last Peep

THE LAST PEEP


The dawn knocked at the night’s door
That was sleeping on the time’s floor
Sunrays rushed in, starting to play
Night out went, and in came the day

Stars, at once, vanished from the sky 
As the sun proudly climbed up high
Over the clear skies rode with glee
His likeness upon the waters trying to see

I observed him gallop from East to West
When his work was done, he wanted to rest
Kissed the day goodnight, all set ready to sleep
But before going down HE had a very last PEEP!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   17 February 2013

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Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2013 at 10:10 PM This is adorable!!

Lucilla Carrillo February 17, 2013 at 7:17 PM A poem, about night and day. It is briliant how the sun says good night and takes a last peep. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Demetrios Trifiatis February 18, 2013 at 4:50 AM Thank you LUCILLA!

Donna Jones February 17, 2013 at 6:57 PM Very nicely done Demetrios, seems we find ourselves having that last peep too. Watching the very last gold slip away.... Demetrios Trifiatis February 18, 2013 at 4:50 AM It is so nice of you!

Jack Ellison February 17, 2013 at 7:35 AM You done did it again my friend... another keeper! BRILLIANT! Cheers from Canada! Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2013 at 11:17 AM So you have lived in Montreal? La ville que j'aime! Fantastique mon ami! Merci! Thank you!

Rockman Pritts February 17, 2013 at 3:32 AM Very nice. I love poems of nature. especially ones that involve the suns journey across the sky. This was quite enjoyable. I don't mean to toot my own horn but I have a few if you would like to read. They are, "The Crimson Lips Of Dawn" and "The Passing Of A Day". Thanks for sharing. Rockman :-) Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2013 at 10:39 AM Thank you Rockman for your kind words! Certainly I will have a look!

Mehnaz Veetil February 17, 2013 at 3:15 AM a beautiful write , thanks for sharing ...thank you for the kind visits at my page.... Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2013 at 11:15 AM Thank you, You are welcome!

Eileen Manassian February 17, 2013 at 2:08 AM I was enchanted by this, Demetrios. Great write from one of my favorite poets! Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2013 at 11:06 AM Thank you very much! You are so kind!