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for Craig's contest Black and White

The Last Memory

I sit to ponder on my life and death,
knowing one day my memories will end.
As I approach my last days I don't want yesterday,
to be more important than tomorrow.
I don't want to relive the shades and shadows,
   of what has passed.

How sad that would be, how empty that would be.
The temptation to do so is there, it's easy to believe,
   I have lived enough,
and spend the last years of life resting and reflecting.

It's unfulfilling and has no sense of accomplishment.
So I'll march on, one slow step after another,
my face in the wind, my eyes facing forward,
until my final memory is my last breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Dear friend, dear poet, I adore the persuasive, perseverant spirit of your amazing introspective poem. As I 'grow' into my older years I relate strongly to your poetic thoughts so eloquently expressed in the tender passion of your verse. I was especially struck by "As I approach my last days I don't want yesterday,/to be more important than tomorrow" and "it's easy to believe,/I have lived enough" - wow! poignant and profound. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest with this deep, affecting piece. A fav for me, dear Frederic. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Empress Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:06 PM
A very heartfelt and profound write this is dear frederick, i felt this, so very much especially the way youv written “ I don't want to relive the shades and shadows, of what has passed.” i can resonate with that, and i think many would too, “ How sad that would be, how empty that would be. The temptation to do so is there, it's easy to believe, I have lived enough,” easy to believe and is reassuring to say that to ones self! This is such a soulfully moving poem. Pleasure reading, congratulations
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:11 PM
A great read of an universal theme with the ultimate reality. When there is truth, it comes from a very heart with such depth. Regards
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 1:36 PM
I love this poem. I guess I am taking it too literally , not knowing how the heck to address that black and white theme
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:02 AM
- I especially like the last line, Frederic - I have "seen death many times" I think it is not at all what we imagine ...- A deep poem, best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Meadows Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 8:30 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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