The last luck

The new moon, a time for new beginnings,
Like a butterfly from a cocoon,
Or so they say,
Are they right?
Will the luck last?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Hello Fire bird, no one knows if the luck will last. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Hello Fire Bird, Yes Fire3 bird you are right. did you have a good new Year's Eve? enjoy your evening my vfriend. /Darlene/
Bird Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 1:05 AM
Luck is something that you definitely cannot rely on. Thanks for dropping in Darlene! - Phoenix:)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 12:27 PM
All things must come to some end. It's the law of nature.
Bird Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Yes Victor, that is true. - Phoenix :)
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