The Last Line

a bloom in deathbed--twilight's bidding goodbye


12/27/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:16 PM
- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:34 AM
Thank you, congrats too. All the best, Anne-Lise. hugs!
Roper Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Nicely done, Moon Flower. You've showed so much sadness in just one line. Good luck in the contest. May your new year be very blessed. Hugs Eve~`*
Flower Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Eve. Have a blessed New Year as well. Love & Light. Hugs. :)
Sands Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Flower Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Thank you, again. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful and evocative, lovely done. Congrats on your win :) xomo!
Flower Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Maureen.
Sands Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Flower Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Thank you, Heidi. :)
Y. Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Hi Moon Flower, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Flower Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you. :)
One Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Beautiful words, lovely imagery Moon.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Flower Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Silent O. :) Too bad I missed the other Monoku poetry contest. All the best!
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