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The Last Hurdle

What do I want to write? I think I will write about all What is all? Is it when you have everything? Or is it when God says you have everything? What God says matter If He says you have the whole world you will have it lol So what does it feel like? It's a liberated feeling Knowing that nothing or no one can affect you There is a certain peace in your spirit A certain calmness A feeling of certainty Yes friend God will give you that if you ask Him You may go through weeks of travail with Him walk with you through some things But ultimately He will give to you So don't give up The result is so worthwhile He will let you know

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/3/2014 7:16:00 AM

True to the core! When we let things in God's hands nothing will go wrong! Beautifully written dear Toquyen!

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/3/2014 7:31:00 AM

Yes :) Thank, Demetrios. Love ya!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2014 7:50:00 PM

Amen! God is good!777777 rating.

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/2/2014 8:14:00 PM

Yes, thanks, Rick. He is good!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/2/2014 12:51:00 AM

Jesus can get me through anything and I totally trust in Him. Thank you for the wonderful poem. Love and prayers, Gina

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/2/2014 6:58:00 AM

Yes! Thanks, Gina :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2014 1:55:00 PM

Dear Toguyen, I should print this out and put it where I will see it every day. Sometimes, it is hard to face life's trials, but prayer and faith always help. Bless you! Love, Carolyn

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/1/2014 2:03:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn. Yes, do. God will give to you if you ask Him. Love ya, Toquyen

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/1/2014 11:41:00 AM

Such are the tiny miracles, in our lives every day.

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/1/2014 12:38:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Glad you come by :)

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 8/31/2014 5:17:00 AM

In the midst of an adversity, we all hope and seek to calm the storm...I enjoyed your powerful poem, especially the following lines: "It's a liberated feeling Knowing that nothing or no one can affect you There is a certain peace in your spirit A certain calmness A feeling of certainty"

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/31/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Ndaba! I am glad you like it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2014 8:01:00 AM

- Be strong in the quiet, be faithful in the small, then you will extend far and will reach your goal :)) - Happy weekend,Toquyen !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/30/2014 8:29:00 AM

Good advice, Anne-Lise. Yes! You too :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2014 7:25:00 AM

I like this one..It speaks of your faith in a loving God who knows what we need and when we need it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/30/2014 8:28:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Love ya :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/28/2014 8:55:00 PM

I find it fascinating, God gives me everything I need, at the time I need it and worrying about tomorrow is truly a waste of my time. Great write Toquyen

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/28/2014 9:19:00 PM

Good thinking, Jerry :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/28/2014 8:23:00 PM

I like that-its a liberated feeling-it's more than confidence, it is trust that the good Lord will provide and fulfill his promises. i like this :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/28/2014 9:19:00 PM

Yes! He always does :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/28/2014 7:04:00 PM

He has given us many gifts. We must use them wisely...hugs Tim

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/28/2014 7:08:00 PM

Yes, He sure did!