Toquyen Harrell Poet Free verse

The Last Hurdle

What do I want to write?
I think I will write about all 
What is all?
Is it when you have everything?
Or is it when God says you have everything?
What God says matter
If He says you have the whole world 
you will have it lol
So what does it feel like?
It's a liberated feeling
Knowing that nothing or no one can affect you
There is a certain peace in your spirit
A certain calmness
A feeling of certainty
Yes friend God will give you that
if you ask Him
You may go through weeks of travail with Him
walk with you through some things
But ultimately He will give to you
So don't give up
The result is so worthwhile
He will let you know

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Demetrios Trifiatis September 3, 2014 at 7:16 AM True to the core! When we let things in God's hands nothing will go wrong! Beautifully written dear Toquyen! Toquyen Harrell September 3, 2014 at 7:31 AM Yes :) Thank, Demetrios. Love ya!

Richard Lamoureux September 2, 2014 at 7:50 PM Amen! God is good!777777 rating. Toquyen Harrell September 2, 2014 at 8:14 PM Yes, thanks, Rick. He is good!

Regina Mcintosh September 2, 2014 at 12:51 AM Jesus can get me through anything and I totally trust in Him. Thank you for the wonderful poem. Love and prayers, Gina Toquyen Harrell September 2, 2014 at 6:58 AM Yes! Thanks, Gina :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2014 at 1:55 PM Dear Toguyen, I should print this out and put it where I will see it every day. Sometimes, it is hard to face life's trials, but prayer and faith always help. Bless you! Love, Carolyn Toquyen Harrell September 1, 2014 at 2:03 PM Thanks, Carolyn. Yes, do. God will give to you if you ask Him. Love ya, Toquyen

M. L. Kiser September 1, 2014 at 11:41 AM Such are the tiny miracles, in our lives every day. Toquyen Harrell September 1, 2014 at 12:38 PM Thanks, ML. Glad you come by :)

Ndaba Sibanda August 31, 2014 at 5:17 AM In the midst of an adversity, we all hope and seek to calm the storm...I enjoyed your powerful poem, especially the following lines: "It's a liberated feeling Knowing that nothing or no one can affect you There is a certain peace in your spirit A certain calmness A feeling of certainty" Toquyen Harrell August 31, 2014 at 7:34 AM Thanks, Ndaba! I am glad you like it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2014 at 8:01 AM - Be strong in the quiet, be faithful in the small, then you will extend far and will reach your goal :)) - Happy weekend,Toquyen !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Toquyen Harrell August 30, 2014 at 8:29 AM Good advice, Anne-Lise. Yes! You too :)

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2014 at 7:25 AM I like this one..It speaks of your faith in a loving God who knows what we need and when we need it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Toquyen Harrell August 30, 2014 at 8:28 AM Thanks, Sara. Love ya :)

Jerry T Curtis August 28, 2014 at 8:55 PM I find it fascinating, God gives me everything I need, at the time I need it and worrying about tomorrow is truly a waste of my time. Great write Toquyen Toquyen Harrell August 28, 2014 at 9:19 PM Good thinking, Jerry :)

Casarah Nance August 28, 2014 at 8:23 PM I like that-its a liberated feeling-it's more than confidence, it is trust that the good Lord will provide and fulfill his promises. i like this :) Toquyen Harrell August 28, 2014 at 9:19 PM Yes! He always does :)

Tim Smith August 28, 2014 at 7:04 PM He has given us many gifts. We must use them wisely...hugs Tim Toquyen Harrell August 28, 2014 at 7:08 PM Yes, He sure did!