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The rain drops, drip-drops from the eaves Wind creates a sighing in the amber needled pine trees Moonless night puts all in this fall's deep night sleep Even howling from coyotes slowly slows and cease There's a ghoulish feeling to the damp air's flight As the mist swirls on this coal black night Invited inside where a small fire in the fireplace is aglow Where a comforting warmth from the hearth does flow The silvery hair upon his old head As memories of years gone by have suddenly fled They left on Alzheimer's tangles last call This most dreaded Halloween of all
Written: October 31, 2022

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Date: 11/6/2022 6:35:00 PM
The damp and dark night with escalating gloom is so powerfully delineated. A poem quite in keeping with the Halloween spirit, dear Sara...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/7/2022 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Scary thought to think that Alzheimer's has fully hit home. Sara
Date: 11/1/2022 2:52:00 PM
Interesting write, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2022 4:31:00 AM
Kim, thank you for your kind review. Sara
Date: 11/1/2022 2:08:00 AM
That is a dreaded illness. Still a great poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2022 3:52:00 AM
Yes, Victor, it is. It runs in my husband's family or at least they think that is what it is. No one has had an autopsy done to see if that is what it is for sure. Sara
Date: 10/31/2022 5:04:00 PM
This dark and direful tale is great for Halloween. Excellent imagery! :) Evelyn
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2022 3:50:00 AM
Evelyn, Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/31/2022 11:14:00 AM
Who knows? He can't remember . . . .Aloha!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/31/2022 11:27:00 AM
Rico, Right, he can't remember. Sara
Date: 10/31/2022 10:56:00 AM
I loved your poem, Sara. Your imagery coupled with your wonderful diction shed a beautiful and stunning layer on your writing. Be blessed dear friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/31/2022 11:26:00 AM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara

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