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The last goodbye

Inviting vibrancy as the season changed
Smiley faces bloomed, reopening dreams. 
Seeing you there marked a blessed event
Akin to magical when first time eyes met.

Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves
Flirting with patterns of shadowy sketches,
There you unfolded what love could mean
Planting bold dreams in affectionate kisses 
Floating on air in the lilting summer winds. 

Blazing colors inspired falling ocher scenery
Dazzling in hues of resplendent paintings
As we wrote music in autumn's reverie: 
A seductive beginning of romantic ending
Composed in themes of passionate lyrics.

Mountain tops donned snow-white crowns
Satiating fantasies in pristine landscapes,
Culminating desires into sensual escapes
As the last goodbye lent your heart to me
Ending your visit and our idyllic love story.

Your beat I hear still, but it lost its melody.

November 29, 2018
Poem of the day on December 1, 2018
Placed first in The Last poetry contest by Silent One
Placed first in Mid February 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 2/22/2019 6:18:00 PM
Hello Viiaj Pandit,your poem at the end is sad. It is not easy to break up. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/14/2019 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Vijay..
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Date: 2/14/2019 11:52:00 AM
You are a winner Vijay. Your words belong soaring beyond the sky. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/11/2019 12:17:00 AM
There is no point in congratulating so late, but that does not take away anything from the poem so well written, Vijay Pandit.
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:41:00 PM
double congrats, I see this is your number one poem now and also it got a POTD. Way to go, Vijay.
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Date: 12/30/2018 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations for #7 on the Best New Poems List Vijay :)
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Date: 12/26/2018 9:41:00 AM
A surprise at the end of a well written love store captures the reality of a heart shocked by betrayal.
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Date: 12/16/2018 1:04:00 PM
Dear Vijah, it is absolutely a masterpiece and certainly a favorite for me, um, I guess that I am late but still it is not late enough to congratulate you and I see that it has also won a contest, so many congratulations on your wonderful win and on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck my friend and have a really nice day
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Faraz..appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:04:00 AM
Sorry my great friend, I have only now discovered this exquisitely creative, wondrously beautiful and magnificent gem you have created! Such depths of love in these verses and one can see this as being from a real life experience, one that sings true to the romantic melody in a true poet's heart. A fav.. a glistening jewel my friend..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/11/2018 2:55:00 PM
A much belated congratulations on your win Vijay.. A beautiful and breathtaking verse you indeed penned.. Imagery is incredible!! I so much enjoyed your exquisite verse, my friend.. Blessings!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Robertina..your visit and kind words are much appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2018 2:12:00 PM
Hi Vijay, An amazing poem, a write proudly awaiting deserved comments. The passion you portray is so real, I can all most feel it as I read each line - well done. Best wishes, Jennifer
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer..appreciate the kind feedback.
Date: 12/8/2018 8:59:00 AM
Really intriguing last line...no more melody...A wonderful write all over...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 12/5/2018 10:01:00 AM
WoW! Great melancholy love poem, VJ. Kudos on POTD. This beautiful poem moves the heart on exquisite wings of poetic elegance. Stellar bright write. Love and more love always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Freddie..always happy to read your comments..many many thanks.
Date: 12/3/2018 10:32:00 AM
Hi Vijay...I see that since I last visited, this excellent poem has garnered a top placement and p.o.t.d. award ..... Congratulations on all counts!! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for the return visit Paul...appreciate the cheerful feedback.
Date: 12/3/2018 9:53:00 AM
Vijay, this is gorgeous. So literate and emotive. Very good indeed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Dale..appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/2/2018 6:38:00 PM
Such beautiful verse; especially, "Mountain tops donned snow-white crowns Satiating fantasies in pristine landscapes, Culminating desires into sensual escapes As the last goodbye lent your heart to me Ending your visit and our idyllic love story. "; I do love that.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you M.L.K...appreciate the visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/2/2018 5:48:00 PM
Awesome poem and placement. Congrats to you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 12/2/2018 4:55:00 PM
Double Congratulations Vijay: ......for your top placement and POTD. Your poem is a lovely story unfolding. Hugs SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thank you SuZ for your visit and kind words.
Date: 12/2/2018 4:34:00 PM
Hello Vijay, Congratulations on the POTD honor!! Well-Deserved!! The is a wondrous verse write in every respect. I can see why it placed "First" in Silent One's contest. The imagery, the words, and the poem's closing message in the last stanza are perfect!! Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for your cheerful comments..many thanks for the visit and pleasant feedback.
Date: 12/2/2018 6:53:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win Vijay !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 12/2/2018 4:14:00 AM
Your beat I hear still, but it lost its melody.......Sigh....Why does this make me so sad? Beautifully penned Vijay as only you can my dear friend. Congrats on your POTD. and of course the contest. Brilliant.....Maria hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you my good friend..I'm honored by your visit..haven't seen you much lately in this space. Appreciate your kind words, Maria.
Date: 12/2/2018 12:36:00 AM
So potent and so sad. I like this poem and congratulate you on your win. Kind wishes and new beginnings, Kai
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thanks you Kai..appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 12/1/2018 11:08:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on this wonderful well written deeply moving poem, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:18:00 AM
Many thanks Eve..appreciate your return visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/1/2018 7:52:00 PM
I love this romantic poem you were honored with POTD with Vijay. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest too. It is very deserving of the honor. I just Faved this beauty my friend. Maybe she will come again in spring! Happy Holidays Vijay! : )xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:18:00 AM
Appreciate your delightful comments Connie..means a lot coming from you. Thank for your visit, as always.
Date: 12/1/2018 6:50:00 PM
Once again, as I am reading these words I can feel them so deeply. I'm not sure why. They hold me so close. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. On your win as well. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
Your pleasant comments are always a joy to read..always appreciate your visit and the time you take to convey good feelings.
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