The Last Dance

To whom it may concern, 


We wrote in a rhythm that was soft and slow 
Between the lines where we could go
You brought the bass, I brought the breeze,
Dancing together, pens moved fluidly 

No label fit yet promises were made 
Ones said were real never to fade 
You spoke in beats, I answered low
And in between I thought we’d grow 

But then you left without a sound
No soft goodbye, no common ground
No final line, no open door
No last dance, no nothing more

I searched the space you used to be
A half-lit room inside of me
The words we built began to fade
Yet my heart still hoped you’d stay

But hope gets tired, worn and thin
So I turned the page, let healing in
You won’t return, and that’s okay
Some people aren’t meant to stay

So I end our chapter, close a book of shame 
No bitter ink nor shades of blame
You were the verse, I was the theme
For a little while, we shared a dream

And when you paused, I took the floor
Not begging you to give me more.
I danced alone, and in that space
I found my strength, my quiet grace

So here’s to us, the brief, the bright
The words, the rhythm, and the light
No bitter end, no final blow….
Just love, and time, and letting go

Love always,
Brenda

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/20/2025 7:15:00 PM
Oh wow! Simply stunningly beautiful, showing pure love, acceptance and tremendous inner strength. A clear fav for me.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/20/2025 8:35:00 PM
Ahhh thank you so much! I dkk ok appreciate the love :)
Date: 8/3/2025 3:27:00 PM
I am glad you are back too, Poetess. Come to think about it...I am glad also to be back. Seems like I was away a long time. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/20/2025 8:35:00 PM
lol I. Glad you are back too! Thank you John!;)
Date: 7/19/2025 2:24:00 PM
Brenda, wow this was an amazing poem, excellent writing !Oh, I have been where you were, not just with a lover, with people who I thought were friends. But with the strength you write about I healed and grew stronger. a FAV ~
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/20/2025 4:44:00 PM
Yeah it’s friends that do it to you that hurts even more! Terrible but a love….yeah but one can ignore it or grow from it I choose I learn! Thank you Constance I’m glad I’m back here! :)
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