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The Last Dance

Eyes like sunrise and a heart of gold Woven together into that beautiful soul. Waltzing together in this room of old Fates and melting into this endless glow. Falling through this enchanted flow, like rivers. Sand clocks trapped in an endless loop of time, Dancing to a far-away chime. Ever after, it seemed, But it broke As soon as the song ceased, The hearts broken with the glass, Yet, still holding onto the memories of past. Date: 14/08/2022 Contest name: Strong Emotions Poetry Contest. Sponser:Emile Pinet. Emotion: Love.

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Date: 8/31/2022 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful high placement. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/31/2022 5:35:00 AM
A beautiful poem, congratulations!
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:19:00 PM
Beautifully written poem that captures the highs and lows in love. You have said so much with so little. Bravo & Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/30/2022 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Bommi! Linda
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Date: 8/30/2022 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations Bommi! Your poem "The Last Dance", earned you a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 100 poems entered but your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of this accomplishment, this was a hard contest to judge, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 8/14/2022 10:43:00 PM
Beautifully crafted, enjoyed
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