The Last Dance


Eyes like sunrise and a heart of gold
Woven together into that beautiful soul.
Waltzing together in this room of old
Fates and melting into this endless glow.

Falling through this enchanted flow, like rivers.
Sand clocks trapped in an endless loop of time,
Dancing to a far-away chime.

Ever after, it seemed, But it broke 
As soon as the song ceased,
The hearts broken with the glass,
Yet, still holding onto the memories of past.

Date: 14/08/2022
Contest name: Strong Emotions Poetry Contest.
Sponser:Emile Pinet.
Emotion: Love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful high placement. Blessings xxoo
Miller Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 5:35 AM
A beautiful poem, congratulations!
Nusker Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 10:19 PM
Beautifully written poem that captures the highs and lows in love. You have said so much with so little. Bravo & Congrats on your win.
Fowler Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations on your win Bommi! Linda
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations Bommi! Your poem "The Last Dance", earned you a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 100 poems entered but your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of this accomplishment, this was a hard contest to judge, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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August 14, 2022 at 10:43 PM
Beautifully crafted, enjoyed
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