Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Alliteration

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The Last Dance

As a shimmering sea mirrored such scarlet sunset wonders,
The last of a languid day, left a sky of livid lavenders.
This calm, capricious, charming act, captivated with color,
That moved on monotonous, madcap waves, in midst of summer.

Purple, placid, pleasing clouds, seemed painted on purposely,
In scintillating, searing, sunset rays, also seen in the sea.
A timeless, torrid, torturous, twilight, farewell surprise;
And the magic, magenta, moment was also mirrored in my eyes!

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Gershon Wolf November 1, 2020 at 4:16 PM This is a glittering, glamorous, glorious write, Evelyn! Delightful! :) gw Evelyn Judy Buehler November 1, 2020 at 4:40 PM Gee, I got a great and giddy feeling from that grand comment. Thank you. :)

Alexis Y. October 30, 2020 at 4:59 PM WoW! Evelyn, Your use of alliteration is impressive. Good imagery and content. PS, The photo and the Video meshed well with your poem. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler October 30, 2020 at 6:50 PM Thank you so very much for all of your gratifying remarks, Alexis. Have a good night, my friend.

Silent One October 30, 2020 at 5:27 AM Nice use of alliteration here, shimmering sea, sounds beautiful under a scarlet sunset... Lovely imagery and great choice of music as always... Evelyn Judy Buehler October 30, 2020 at 10:55 AM As usual, your supportive comment has brightened my day. Thank you so much. :)

Victor Buhagiar October 30, 2020 at 3:06 AM Imagery galore. Never tired of reading your poetry. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler October 30, 2020 at 10:55 AM That's so nice to know. Thank you.