Meenakshi Raina Poet Rhyme

The Last Call

My worst fear is what if 
I die a sudden death,
where unexpectedly I am 
deprived of my breath.
	I want death to be kind
	approach in steps small,
	and when I hear them louder
	I know it is the last call.
A similar wish to God
my grandma also made,
I heard her many times 
when sincerely she prayed.
	Fortunate was my grandma 
	now I keep wishing on a star,
	and I hope God listens to
	what I fear for.
Death is the ultimate truth
and life has to descend,
I don't want my loved ones
to face my abrupt end.


June 23, 2016.
Your Worst Fear - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

Sept 27, 2016 Your greatest fear - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes 

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Bl Devnath June 26, 2016 at 1:08 PM Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl

Balveen Cheema June 25, 2016 at 9:35 PM Congrats Meeakshi on the well worded thought!

Sandra Haight June 25, 2016 at 5:41 PM Excellently expressed, Meenakshi. We all pray for death to be kind. Congratulations on your win in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 4:19 PM One we can all relate to Meenaskshi congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray June 25, 2016 at 3:48 PM Really good Meenaskshi.I remember my father telling me once."It's not death I'm afraid of Jeaniemac, It's how I will die that scares me." Condratulations on your win.

Beautiful Scars June 25, 2016 at 3:23 PM Meenakshi, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo