The Last Blackout
I was in a bar
I was struck in the head
3 times
The knee
3 times
Didn't step back
Didn't go down
Striking stopped
I walked out
Don't know who hit me
Just know he was
lucky
Lucky he didn't
take on
a tough guy
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