The Last Battle

THE LAST BATTLE

In a huddled lump, old soldier on Front Street,
But the hurrying winter crowds never even see  him
As they stop for hot dogs in the snow on a child’s whim. 
An army of people pass but no one wants to meet
The  salute in his eyes; and he greets only feet       
As he pulls his old medal tunic around his one limb 
In a huddled lump.

Long months since his last time to eat meat   
Or fill his battered metal cup to the rim.
Clutching his sheet as his battle memories dim,
He finally falls in defeat fom the hail of sleet  -
In a huddled  lump.  

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Written by Sydney Peck   on  21  July  2012

Entered in  Nette Onclaud's  Contest   RONDINE  -   THE TRAFFIC OF LIFE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Poor Vet. Makes a revelant point mate. Did u friend me on Facebook recently, If not it's the crappy hackers...?
A   Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:58 PM
Sidney ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Yes a unique aproach here !Congrats on the win Syd!
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:14 PM
you really did the contest in a most interesting way. unique and a well deserved win, Sidney.
Williams Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Sidney congrats on your win..like this one...David
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:08 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Great idea for the topic...Sara
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Congrats on your win with this outstanding write, Sidney! Knowing it's a true story makes it all the more powerful....love and blessings
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:50 AM
KC, you start and finish with the strokes of poignancy... congrats on your stunning win in my contest... and the fee is----. just kidding.. this so gut-wrenching i needed a comic relief... salute!..:) huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your superb win Sydney, like this one xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Sidney, this is excellent! Such a tender and poignant write. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Beck Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:59 AM
So glad you liked it.....it's based closely on an old guy we saw only days ago on Nevski Prospekt in St Petersburg (Russia) where we live......thankfully in reality he didn't actually fall and die.....bestwishes to you Rhonda
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