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The Lash of Her Tongue

Mom's tongue-lashing ~ far more potent than fistic thrashing

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Date: 7/19/2024 8:18:00 PM
Oh yeah, a tongue lashing can hurt so bad!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/20/2024 9:02:00 PM
Even without a 'forked tongue!' lol. Thanks, Kim
Date: 7/19/2024 8:28:00 AM
But you turned out OK, didn't you. Moms have a difficult job.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/20/2024 9:08:00 PM
Ha, ha. I didn't turn out so 'ok.' Took me 'til 40 to get rid of my home's dark side. My mom did have a difficult job, but... I've said enough already. She had a tough lot in life to overcome.
Date: 7/19/2024 5:05:00 AM
Ah but many of us got the double treat lol
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Date: 7/19/2024 4:32:00 AM
The cutting blow when she would say..."the truth only hurts when it's supposed too"
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/20/2024 9:12:00 PM
Wise words, O Oracle...
Date: 7/19/2024 2:47:00 AM
I am reading your poem after a long time. This is a very powerful monoku rhyme.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/20/2024 9:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alex. Best wishes, Gershon

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