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The Languid Girl

Last night As my husband was working He came across a sight That gave him intense fright! A full bodied apparition A girl, angelic of face with black hair to her waist Dressed in garb From another time Her expression From another dimension At him- through him she stared A circling of energy they shared It poured outside Yet she was fully dry Shivers ran throughout his body as this figure was moving so slow with sadness, depression Surrounding her like a cloak Was she real? Or was she a ghost? A. Green True story, as of April 7. 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 11:24:00 PM
Ow my this gave me chills..Its scary..deep and true...great write..touched my heart and soul..Charma
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Date: 4/7/2010 1:21:00 PM
scary!!
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:12:00 AM
NICE!
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:54:00 AM
Wow, Amy!! And I wonder what would the skeptics say about this? I can only imagine the chills....Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:43:00 AM
Enjoyed ! thank you.
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