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The Lament of Amber Water

There is a day the last day of the year To reminisce ponder and yes a tear The next day comes along full of hope As if to give us all enough rope Resolutions spent in lieu one cold beer. © Harry J Horsman 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2014 5:50:00 AM
on the site it goes xx
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Date: 9/8/2012 1:18:00 AM
well, I think I have read all of page five, but just to tell you again. this limerick has one awesome last line!!!
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest Harry
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Date: 12/31/2010 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on your worthy poem's place. My best to you for 2011. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:14:00 PM
Cogratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 12/31/2010 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in Carolyn's Contest, Harry! Wishing you a very Happy New Year! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:38:00 AM
awesome!.. CONGRATS on the award! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:13:00 PM
congratulations, Harry and have fun tomorrow night with a cold beer!!
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Date: 12/30/2010 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations harry on this well deserved win!
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:32:00 AM
Happy new year and congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of carolyn, harry
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "New Year's Resolutions" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 2:56:00 AM
A thought-provoking write, Harry. Well done! Competition was incredible. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:48:00 AM
Harry, this is a petite poem, lissom with the delicacy of that reflective thought. Thanks for reading my poems and for your kind comment, noble poet.
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:11:00 PM
Enjoying your limerick and my x- mass i hope so are you,, have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 12/24/2010 10:54:00 PM
GOOD one, Harry. Oh, that cold beer! Luv, Andrea ps MERRY christmas!
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Date: 12/24/2010 9:14:00 PM
Hai harry,this is a brilliant piece from your pen.
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:33:00 AM
Oi! wow! wonderful,,, choice,, have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:45:00 PM
Oh resolution time is upon us all Harry .. a splendid write my friend .. neat way of phrasing this piece .. lamenting.. a very deep emotion..luv.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for supporting the contest, Harry. Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:49:00 PM
Quite funny, frolicso0me yet witty write, harry
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Date: 12/23/2010 5:26:00 PM
A cold beer makes me "GROAN" in a good way~FUNNY!!!!~Rick
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