The Lake of Tears

A Lake of tears I am 
Many lily blossoms 
 everyday here and 
I await the presence 
Of someone always
Just to watch it al least
Though it is a vain hope 
still I continue .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 16, 2012 at 1:25 AM
I dont think this is a vain hope..I feel it is quite admirable..I will out this on my favorites..Juniper
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October 16, 2012 at 3:18 AM
thank you dear jk your doll
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October 16, 2012 at 1:25 AM
*put
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June 17, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Sorrowful moments....but nerver give up. - Lovely written jk. - like it a lot. - Have a nice Sunday. - Thank you for visit and comments mine poems.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 17, 2012 at 11:14 AM
thanks .jk
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June 17, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Touching write.Very nice!
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June 17, 2012 at 8:54 AM
thanks dear poet .jk
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June 17, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Love this piece here...so heartfelt!!! very strong lines here to me.
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June 17, 2012 at 8:54 AM
thanks .jk
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