The Lake

Uncompromising, hard society standards
and the rocky nature of some relationships
tend to hem me in from many directions.

Yet, the inlet of ideas, surges or in trickles;
The circumstances which either influence
or cause turbulence in my otherwise
placid existence;  The outlet of thoughts:

my actions and reactions in need, in fear
in sadness, out of joy, out of the abundance
of my heart, all these things not only shaped me 
to what I am now, but also help me thrive.

Daily ablation help remove the weight of excess,
connections which do not help but bring harm.
I reach into the deepest recesses of my being
with a gushing forth spring - fresh, nourishing.

Looking up toward the waters upon the heavens,
I send my unalloyed gratitude with the wind.
In return, I receive strength and renewal –
in soft rain, in torrents.  I do not dry up.



After:  Lake by Georgia Engelhard


For Debbie Guzzi's Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Poets, Ten Days - Painting No. 4
Kim Patrice Nunez
10 January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:56 PM
I loved how you took this painting, equating the human emotions with the mood of the painting here. Loved this!
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January 12, 2016 at 2:22 AM
rooting for you, kim... mow you are on a poetic roll!.. soupie mail in a while!.. huggs
Roper Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Great job, Kim!
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January 11, 2016 at 3:38 PM
I think the sharing of the tips is immensely beneficial. A pleasure to read the poem and the advice. : )
Laurie Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Hello Kim ... this is another great poem from you Kim. Does really speak of the painting - thanks Kim - Lindsay
May Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:46 PM
I like how your words flowed in this write Kim...best wishes...
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Kim, I really really like THIS one. Awesome!
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