The Lake

glassy mountain lake
touched with breezy fingerprints
erased by the shores
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 7:30 PM
So beautiful is this piece, reminiscent of the style of the old masters. Love it!
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:17 PM
"reminiscent of the style of the old masters???" One of the nicest compliments my poetry has received. Thank you for visiting.
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:32 AM
I like the image you portray with these few words, Michael. Enjoyable. // paul
Johnson Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Paul. I'm happy you found it enjoyable.
May Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:15 PM
very nice Haiku Michael
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Happy you enjoy. Thank you for visiting.
Gifford Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Enjoyed your Haiku, a true image of the lake.
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:47 PM
I am pleased you enjoyed.
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