The Lady of the Lake

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Like a bird with no nest in Spring, wandering from tree to tree  ~the young lady thought.
Like a sailboat with no sails,
adrift in the lonely ocean left to its fate  ~the young lady shivered.
Like a child without presents at Christmas, wondering if Santa Claus lost the address  ~the young lady was heartbroken.

She walked alone in the harsh 
blizzard looking for her prince, her aching heart was bleeding
after losing the love of her life.
Overcome with grief, the young lady disappeared into the freezing dark lake to meet her beloved one.

Sometimes, beside the lake, you can listen to the Lady of the Lake singing in the winter nights.
Sometimes, under the moonlight, you can see two shapes embraced dancing above the waters.

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Date: 12/15/2023 4:07:00 PM
Interesting and well written :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/16/2023 1:09:00 AM
Hello Heidi. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your lovely comment. Have a nice weekend!
Date: 12/14/2023 3:48:00 PM
such a wonder, this lady lake tale, thanks for sahring talent and inspiration, enjoyed poet Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/14/2023 4:22:00 PM
Merçi bcp Yann. Your lovely words are always my happinessxcc
Date: 12/14/2023 2:31:00 PM
Hello Maria, oh! Wow! My fav. Merry Christmas Maria. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/16/2023 10:38:00 AM
Hello Maria, Thank you for the mail. You are welcome. enjoy your day my friend.. /Darlene/ Love /Darlene/
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/14/2023 2:37:00 PM
My dear Darlene. Thank you very much. You will have a mail from me tonight. Thanks for the dav too my dear. Love, María
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