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The Lady in Gloom

Set to weave on an age-old loom
Living within an empty room
Through night and day in same costume
Like a Shallot Lady in gloom.
She looks into a mirror left
As shadows come, and shadows flight
Run her shuttle as they alight
Leaving the loom, creeping in fright
Reveals the entire slender weft. 

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September 10, 2014
Form: Rhyme AAAAbCCCB
Sixth Place Win
Contest: The Lady of Shallot by Isaiah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2016 12:01:00 AM
Miss you...I don't care what anybody says....love Linda
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:58:00 AM
Awesome
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:08:00 AM
This poem makes me think of people who are still enslaved in the world today. Poignant write. Congrats on your win. Theresa x
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 9/15/2014 5:04:00 AM
Very cohesive poem Dr. Mehta. Nice win. Congratulations. Have a pleasant day. Earl
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:14:00 PM
Dr. Ram, nicely written.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:26:00 PM
Well done! Nice in style also. :) xxxx D.
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Date: 9/12/2014 12:10:00 PM
I have fallen in love with this style of poetry. Very well done.
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Date: 9/11/2014 4:10:00 AM
- Very skillfully done, Dr. Ram - Have a great Thursday - oxox //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2014 6:19:00 PM
Great rhyme... I have not written rhyme that way and its actually very nice... Bravo!!
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:35:00 PM
i love the rhyme in this piece. great job Dr. Ram
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