The Lad Waved Hi To the Sun

The lad waved 'Hi' to the sun
  as it arose
    'Bye' as it went down

Although he shed a tear or two
  I've faith
    It'll come back round
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:14 AM
The optimism comes shining through.
Laurie Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Hello Gershon … we need to realize no matter how we feel, the sun will rise again in the morning - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:47 PM
'Course, the question is, Will it be visible?... But the sun will be there. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 4:51 PM
People don’t understand how faith plays out every day. That is why worry is absent of faith. Chicken Little embodied this always thinking the sky is falling.
Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:47 PM
That's right. Where was 'Chicken Big' to set the one of little faith aright?! Thanks for the perceptive comment, Kim. :) gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, I have faith for the sun to return. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, thank you ,I will. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Good for you, Darlene. Keep the Faith! :) gw
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