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The Lad Waved Hi To the Sun

The lad waved 'Hi' to the sun as it arose 'Bye' as it went down Although he shed a tear or two I've faith It'll come back round

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/24/2020 8:14:00 AM
The optimism comes shining through.
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Date: 9/22/2020 5:21:00 PM
Hello Gershon … we need to realize no matter how we feel, the sun will rise again in the morning - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/22/2020 6:47:00 PM
'Course, the question is, Will it be visible?... But the sun will be there. :) gw
Date: 9/22/2020 4:51:00 PM
People don’t understand how faith plays out every day. That is why worry is absent of faith. Chicken Little embodied this always thinking the sky is falling.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/22/2020 6:47:00 PM
That's right. Where was 'Chicken Big' to set the one of little faith aright?! Thanks for the perceptive comment, Kim. :) gw
Date: 9/22/2020 3:58:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, I have faith for the sun to return. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2020 12:46:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, thank you ,I will. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/22/2020 6:45:00 PM
Good for you, Darlene. Keep the Faith! :) gw

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