Mystic Rose Rose Poet Choka

The Lacy Dress

she rises and floats 
in a lacy dress of white 
skirted by heavens own light 

soaked in morning thought  
the rainfall caresses   " life   "   
in creative fanfare time  

charcoal middling clouds 
singing songs, await her not 
she is happy as can be 

lofting in God's house  
as soft as angel whispers 
her voice carries me away 

7/14/2019
Used image # 1
for the fives and sevens contest

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Robertina B. August 7, 2019 at 6:25 AM A belated congratulations on your win, Pixie.. You penned a splendid write! Your amazing talent shines, my friend.. This is a fav for me.. Have a blessed day!

Jeanne Mcgee July 22, 2019 at 9:11 AM Congrats on your winning poem! It is quite lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2019 at 5:31 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior July 21, 2019 at 8:00 PM Congrats!! my friend...superbly done Pix...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2019 at 4:17 PM This is very lovely Vie! It hasn't angelic feel to it. Congratulations on your podium win! : ) xxoo

Joseph May July 21, 2019 at 2:47 PM Beautiful write Vie..Congrats on your win..

Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2019 at 9:02 AM Beautiful imagery. A delicate whispering verse.

Alexis Y. July 14, 2019 at 2:22 PM Hi Pixie, You've penned such a lovely piece with beautiful imagery. As I was reading it the tune of " Here Comes The Bride" popped in my head. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you are having a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2019 at 2:04 PM - Lovely written, Pixie :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)