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The Lacy Dress


she rises and floats 
in a lacy dress of white 
skirted by heavens own light 

soaked in morning thought  
the rainfall caresses   " life   "   
in creative fanfare time  

charcoal middling clouds 
singing songs, await her not 
she is happy as can be 

lofting in God's house  
as soft as angel whispers 
her voice carries me away 

7/14/2019
Used image # 1
for the fives and sevens contest 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/7/2019 6:25:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win, Pixie.. You penned a splendid write! Your amazing talent shines, my friend.. This is a fav for me.. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 7/22/2019 10:25:00 AM
My congratulations for your win. Hugs.
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem! It is quite lovely
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Date: 7/22/2019 5:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2019 8:00:00 PM
Congrats!! my friend...superbly done Pix...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/21/2019 4:17:00 PM
This is very lovely Vie! It hasn't angelic feel to it. Congratulations on your podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:47:00 PM
Beautiful write Vie..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:02:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. A delicate whispering verse.
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Date: 7/15/2019 3:19:00 AM
So tender and beautiful a verse. Your kindness oozes in this poem. You did well. Good luck in the contest. Hugs xo
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Date: 7/14/2019 2:22:00 PM
Hi Pixie, You've penned such a lovely piece with beautiful imagery. As I was reading it the tune of " Here Comes The Bride" popped in my head. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you are having a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2019 2:04:00 PM
- Lovely written, Pixie :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2019 1:44:00 PM
Such pretty imagery! I just watched the very long movie about Joan of Arc! This imagery reminds me of her vision.
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