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The Knock

I sit hearing the knock The door standing shut and seeing no light Me refusing to break the lock Man sitting and stewing in the night. Jesus waiting beyond the door His voice calling out to me Stones beating in my chest Jesus is winning you see.. I crack the door at his knock The stones crumbling to sand Light is flooding my house Man praying as he planned. Jesus standing inside the door My knees buckling to the floor.

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Date: 9/30/2019 5:44:00 PM
Hello Chris Breva, that was some dream. Did you see him clearly? Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2019 2:04:00 PM
Hello Chris Breve, that is a good prompt, to make into a poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Chris Breva
Date: 10/1/2019 6:38:00 AM
No. This was a prompt on another site. It won first place there.
Date: 9/26/2019 4:46:00 AM
I think many Christians have had the same dream. I know I have.
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Chris Breva
Date: 9/26/2019 4:56:00 AM
I wrote that for a contest on another site. It won first o=place so I entered it here too. Glad you're saved.
Date: 9/24/2019 12:43:00 AM
Thank you everyhbody
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