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The Kite - For Contest


The Kite


It was great fun at the Jersey Shore
     flying our kite up high and away.
It is said, 'what goes up, must come down'
     when laws of gravity have their way.

And so it did with a steep nose dive,
     heading, it seemed, to the soft white sand.
But with a will of its own it chose
     a cottage rooftop chimney to land.
 
Our kite went up, up high and away,
     but only came down part way, that day.


Sandra M. Haight

~NA~
Contest: What Goes Up, Must Come Down
Sponsor: Catie Lindsay
Judged: 03/07/2016
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Ocean Beach at the Jersey Shore, 2010.  An electric company utility truck tried to take the kite down, but couldn't reach it with their bucket.  Our kite was still there the next summer in 2011 but eventually was gone in 2012.
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Davey Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Nice story whipped inside this poem... Makes you smile genuinely...good luck in the contest
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