The Kite

Thin flares of magenta flap tantalizingly
From the top of the backyard plum tree.
The kite!
Dad made it for me only yesterday!
How was I to know it would trick me
As soon as I got to fly it by myself?
It had seemed so live and laughing!

I've climbed up as far as I can go.
The branches are getting thin.
Up close, 
I can see the broken bones
Sticking out, the skin torn, 
Stuck through by twigs and branches.
The wind keeps teasing at the thin red tissue.

I want to rescue it from torment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/26/2022 9:16:00 AM
Palpable personification Elizabeth - captivating!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 9/26/2022 5:46:00 PM
I have purpose, Craig. In these remembered pictures I want people to understand the minds of their children. Elizabeth
Date: 8/27/2022 9:34:00 PM
You have turned a simple kite into a living, breathing being, so worthy of your kind-hearted rescue. Brilliant!! Thanks, gw
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/29/2022 3:05:00 AM
You are such a precious commenter, Gersh! As with this one, I sometimes don't know what I have written until you tell me. Thanks so much! Eliz
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