The Kitchenette Motel

Sometimes an
Obsolete 
Old bulb inside him 
Flickers on 
And dimly lights 
His woozy thoughts 
And thirst to write
A song. 

Recall he's human, 
That's to say, he
Thinks he 
Still adheres, 
Not just a washed-up
Singer, missing
Schedules to
Appear. 

The stained and
Scribbled rhymes 
Of scattered nonsense 
On the floor, 
Three gulps of Vodka, 
Bring applause,
Adoring fans,
Encore.



Gene Bourne
06-01-14



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Williams Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Gene a very visual write, I like it...David
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June 3, 2014 at 1:59 AM
I'm glad you liked it, David...and appreciate your comment. I look forward to circulating around. .....Your PS friend........Gene
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Gene, I see you responding to someone called Richard Palmer. Why don't you go to his poetry and leave a comment over there so he will see it?
Bourne Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Thanks for the good advice, Andrea. I now have more free time to circulate and will do so....YF.....Gene
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Hello, Gene. this is great writing. Hope to see more of you here. it reminded me of that one poet known for drinking. But now I forget the guy's name!!
Bourne Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:09 AM
I humbly appreciate your kind words. I never could drink more than one, socially. I think I'm allergic to alcohol :).......Thanks again, Andrea....YF....Gene
Bourne Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 2:59 PM
To PS friend Richard Palmer. My reply wouldn't "combobulate" So...I'll tell you here how much I appreciate the comment. YF......Gene.
Palmer Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:57 AM
still waiting lol,can't bare the suspense lol,loved the poem hope i love the reply
Parker Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 2:10 PM
very discriptive poem Gene, with depth
Bourne Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 2:44 PM
HI, Fred...good to hear from you. As one who values your composing, that's a double thanks to you. Hope all is well your PS friend.........Gene.
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 11:27 AM
nice write Gene
Bourne Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:49 AM
Richard....whew ! ....I think I finally got through to you on how much I appreciate your thoughtful comment....... Your PS friend.....Gene.
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June 1, 2014 at 3:01 PM
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