The Kiss At the Tor

My soul was on fire, as I entered the wood
By the old rusty gate, which silently stood
Absorbing history, making no choice
Passing no judgement, adding no voice

The rough ancient path, veined with roots
To test my step, or scuff my boots
Unhurriedly followed the line of the brook
But this was not the path I took

I turned to the right, climbed up through the trees
Where bracken and brambles tugged at my knees
‘til I reached the edge of the open moor
And strode on up to the lonely tor
Where first we kissed on that moonlit night
Where you held me close, as I held you tight

That was the moment I was truly born
My life before you had been tattered and torn
You gave me the courage to truly be me
You gave me your love unconditionally

Yes, my soul was on fire, as you came into view
On the edge of the rock, by the magical yew
And I knew, as then, you were only her ghost
The spirit of the one I have loved the most
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Nice work and best of luck in the next round...Raul
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April 27, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Beautiful write that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... great work, Nigel and good luck in the contest!
Winter Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 6:19 AM
Congrats once again dear Nigel on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:45 AM
Nigel, your work has a lot of depth, you have an amazing talent, Thanks for sharing it with the world. You know not the enormous contribution you are making to the world of literature. Many generations to come will know of your time. Thank you so much for gracing me with your appreciated comments. Take care and may God continue to bless you and your sacrifices. I too, know the sacrifices and time spent for the dream of writing. Thanks again...Raul
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December 9, 2008 at 9:54 AM
Oh Nigel, this is so beautifully written. The rich imagery and the bittersweet feelings of love lost wraps you up and fills your heart as you read this. Excellent write. Love Robin
Austin Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 3:26 PM
Congrats on this compelling write. Shades of Wuthering Heights. The path taken is what charges the imagination. Bravo. Love, daver
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November 10, 2008 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations Nigel for your great poem being featured :) Regards, Teri
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November 10, 2008 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations Nigel...this one I missed last time , so I'm glad to have a chance to enjoy it! A wonderful poem to be featured this week! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations Nigel on your excellent poetry being featured this week. I must agree very much with Frank's comment. Awesome write! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 3:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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November 10, 2008 at 12:36 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
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November 9, 2008 at 4:22 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Interesting reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
Mc Avatar
October 24, 2008 at 9:40 PM
rymes just flowed so well! enjoyed much thanks and tanks for your comments!
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