Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

The Kiss

Your eyes on mine
mine in yours
kiss me
forked lightning
hot and white
from sky to earth...

Root of flowers
springs from the earth
beneath our feet
outside a tree is full bloom...

Our garden
our heart 
flutters...

We rebuild
shattered trust....

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Robin Davis November 30, 2013 at 3:25 PM Ken Kisses can be very magical and passionate. They can make the heart whole again. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Holiday Wishes poem. Ken Carroll November 30, 2013 at 3:45 PM thank you robin..

Sandy Ivy D September 27, 2013 at 12:08 AM lovely and new. SandyIvy Ken Carroll September 27, 2013 at 12:12 AM Thank you kindly Sandy.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid August 31, 2013 at 3:36 AM KEN NICE FLUTTERING BEAUTIFUL PIECE Ken Carroll August 31, 2013 at 3:40 AM Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for stopping by.. Ken

Maricel Estoque August 26, 2013 at 2:16 AM The things a kiss can do ... great poem! (: - Maricel Ken Carroll August 26, 2013 at 3:57 AM Hi Maricel, Thanks for visiting and the kind comment. Ken

Rachel W August 20, 2013 at 7:17 PM I can feel the spark! Great piece, Kenneth! Cheers, Rach Ken Carroll August 20, 2013 at 7:24 PM Hi Rachel, Thanks for dropping by and leaving wonderful commentary.. regards, Ken..

Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2013 at 7:12 PM wow! Hot and white, sky to earth. now that kiss is huge. Kenneth, i love the new coming bloom. sometimes kisses are even sweeter, when starting over... xox~ Linda Ken Carroll August 20, 2013 at 7:23 PM Hi Linda, Yes kisses are so sensual and affectionate...Thanks for visiting.. Besos, Ken..

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 20, 2013 at 7:17 AM The power of a reassuring kiss. Thanks for this one. Ken Carroll August 20, 2013 at 7:21 AM Thank you Alozor for visiting.. Ken..

Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2013 at 7:16 AM - This is truly a gem, Kenneth ! - Lovely!! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Ken Carroll August 17, 2013 at 10:24 AM Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks for visiting today and your wonderful comment.. Ken...

Skat A August 16, 2013 at 10:54 PM a lovely kiss from me to you. I want a pick from the lovely imagery. like a butterfly, the poem captivates the reader. luv* Skat Ken Carroll August 16, 2013 at 10:59 PM Hi Skat, Thanks for visiting my garden...The most lovely flower is yours... Ken...