The Kiss

Your eyes on mine mine in yours kiss me forked lightning hot and white from sky to earth... Root of flowers springs from the earth beneath our feet outside a tree is full bloom... Our garden our heart flutters... We rebuild shattered trust....

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/30/2013 3:25:00 PM

Ken Kisses can be very magical and passionate. They can make the heart whole again. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Holiday Wishes poem.

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/30/2013 3:45:00 PM

thank you robin..

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 9/27/2013 12:08:00 AM

lovely and new. SandyIvy

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/27/2013 12:12:00 AM

Thank you kindly Sandy.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/31/2013 3:36:00 AM

KEN NICE FLUTTERING BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/31/2013 3:40:00 AM

Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for stopping by.. Ken

Maricel Estoque

Date: 8/26/2013 2:16:00 AM

The things a kiss can do ... great poem! (: - Maricel

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/26/2013 3:57:00 AM

Hi Maricel, Thanks for visiting and the kind comment. Ken

Rachel W

Date: 8/20/2013 7:17:00 PM

I can feel the spark! Great piece, Kenneth! Cheers, Rach

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/20/2013 7:24:00 PM

Hi Rachel, Thanks for dropping by and leaving wonderful commentary.. regards, Ken..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2013 7:12:00 PM

wow! Hot and white, sky to earth. now that kiss is huge. Kenneth, i love the new coming bloom. sometimes kisses are even sweeter, when starting over... xox~ Linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/20/2013 7:23:00 PM

Hi Linda, Yes kisses are so sensual and affectionate...Thanks for visiting.. Besos, Ken..

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/20/2013 7:17:00 AM

The power of a reassuring kiss. Thanks for this one.

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/20/2013 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Alozor for visiting.. Ken..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2013 7:16:00 AM

- This is truly a gem, Kenneth ! - Lovely!! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/17/2013 10:24:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks for visiting today and your wonderful comment.. Ken...

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2013 10:54:00 PM

a lovely kiss from me to you. I want a pick from the lovely imagery. like a butterfly, the poem captivates the reader. luv* Skat

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/16/2013 10:59:00 PM

Hi Skat, Thanks for visiting my garden...The most lovely flower is yours... Ken...