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The Kiss

My toes curled under as he kissed me. Our lips locked in passion so strong, Knee caps cracked in reaction When the suction was gone. Heels touched the floor I looked up At his Nose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 10/23/2009 10:35:00 PM
That kiss was magical indeed! Nice romantic script.
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Date: 12/13/2008 6:20:00 PM
Nice poem, romance at it's best, sounds like first date jitters....Raul
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:30:00 AM
Romantic to the last word. Vince
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Date: 11/6/2008 8:36:00 PM
Mischief curls toes in words. Excellent write with the Pinocchio elongated nose.
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Date: 11/5/2008 6:05:00 PM
So cute was this. Yes...especially if you are smaller, shorter than he is...right up his nose!! :) ~Carrie
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Date: 11/5/2008 1:20:00 PM
This is cute really enjoyed. Beautiful funny write. Blessings Michael
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Date: 11/5/2008 1:17:00 PM
~lo~! Hi Karen. Wow, this really has me giggling so! Too cute and very clever! Great use of this poetry form. Good luck if it's for the contest! Love, Shar
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