The Kiss

My toes curled under as he kissed me.
Our lips locked in passion so strong,
Knee caps cracked in reaction
When the suction was gone.
Heels touched the floor
I looked up
At his 
Nose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Nieves Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 10:35 PM
That kiss was magical indeed! Nice romantic script.
Moreno Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 6:20 PM
Nice poem, romance at it's best, sounds like first date jitters....Raul
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 9:30 AM
Romantic to the last word. Vince
Garg Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 8:36 PM
Mischief curls toes in words. Excellent write with the Pinocchio elongated nose.
Richards Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 6:05 PM
So cute was this. Yes...especially if you are smaller, shorter than he is...right up his nose!! :) ~Carrie
Torres Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 1:20 PM
This is cute really enjoyed. Beautiful funny write. Blessings Michael
Winter Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 1:17 PM
~lo~! Hi Karen. Wow, this really has me giggling so! Too cute and very clever! Great use of this poetry form. Good luck if it's for the contest! Love, Shar
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