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the kintsugi night

Have you seen how nights are? Sometimes glowy but sometimes dull and dark Doesn’t always show us the stars Because she preferred self sabotage Scars of being replaced by the morning Scars of not shining as bright as she could Scars of not being appreciated for trying Scars that couldn’t be comforted by the moon For he had his own phase And I, dreamt of a place Where mornings didn’t exist But here trees couldn’t spread their radiance Butterflies didn’t show their grace And colours couldn’t reflect light How sad would be the man Who hoped for the sun to rise Night learnt how she isn’t meant to be perfect For the man now wanted twilight’s disguise Have you seen how nights are? Doesn’t always show us the stars For she was healing her scars And this time it looked like a kintsugi art

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Date: 11/9/2024 9:34:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/6/2024 1:53:00 PM
Fascinating poem Avika
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Avika Singh
Date: 11/7/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thankyou so much sir! Sir, this is my first poem so I would love to hear some suggestions and places where I can improve.

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