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the kintsugi night

Have you seen how nights are?
Sometimes glowy but sometimes dull and dark
Doesn’t always show us the stars
Because she preferred self sabotage 

Scars of being replaced by the morning
Scars of not shining as bright as she could
 Scars of not being appreciated for trying
 Scars that couldn’t be comforted by the moon
For he had his own phase
And I, dreamt of a place

Where mornings didn’t exist
But here trees couldn’t spread their radiance
Butterflies didn’t show their grace
And colours couldn’t reflect light

How sad would be the man 
Who hoped for the sun to rise
Night learnt how she isn’t meant to be perfect
For the man now wanted  twilight’s disguise

Have you seen how nights are?
Doesn’t always show us the stars
For she was healing her scars
And this time it looked like a kintsugi art

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Date: 11/9/2024 9:34:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/6/2024 1:53:00 PM
Fascinating poem Avika
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Avika Singh
Date: 11/7/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thankyou so much sir! Sir, this is my first poem so I would love to hear some suggestions and places where I can improve.

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