The Kindness

The sun
sliding toward the west on a ruby strip,
the tired sky sighs
sunlight bouquets,
open dawns from dawn
they start to draw their shutters,
from the subway, a great crowd
salty and grieved,
	with sober and windy air	
It cuts its way from the ground,
to the arranged houses,
on the city's metal skeleton
on the streets no rule,
cars - apocalyptic flies,
rushing down the boulevards,
only THE KINDNESS is waiting polite,
at the shimmering red light.

Corina Junghiatu
Bucharest, Romania
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Yes! And a great, great Kindness it certainly is! Love the imagery, esp. the last two lines, Corina. Bunu dimineata! ~ Gershon
Nair Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Nice one.
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