The Killick

The killick that he bore upon his arm
was who he was and also what he was
a badge, a rank, a sanctioned state of mind.
The discipline the powers sought to bear
empowered men like him to bully boys
and so rank them according to their tastes,
social whims, or fiscal given favors
as is the life, the mothers sold their sons

The killick that he bore upon his arm
was who he was, for now, but that could change;
for willing boys were hard to press to feed
desires of those who stood upon the bridge.
Should he succeed, then he may make first mate
less able, demoted back to Able.
For ’tis the boys that tug upon the ropes
that Captains need and Killicks train to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Onclaud Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 8:07 AM
this write swings way out of the ballpark; well done in its unique approach!
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Thank you so much
Rose  Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Very nicely written gl in the contest
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Thank you so much
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:04 AM
- It is the perfect piece for this contest, Terry :) - Excellent written :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 4:56 PM
an amazing take for the Killick contest. I especially liked: The killick that he bore upon his arm was who he was and also what he was a badge, a rank, a sanctioned state of mind. best wishes with the contest!
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Sara
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