The Key

keys
plunk
stroking
ivory
melody awakes
our bodies sway rhythmically


Contest Twenty/ Twenty
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
*Twenty syllables above

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 5, 2012 at 8:58 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Would love to know how you put the pics in. I enjoy the visual. Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

March 4, 2012 at 2:18 PM

Congrats on your winning work...See that the site has a new feature and you are taking advantage of it ...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 3, 2012 at 10:56 AM

Love it with the photos, Debbie :D Love what you say here even more :) Super congrats on your win :D hugs!

Ralph Taylor

March 3, 2012 at 8:09 AM

Congrats, Deb. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. luv and hugs, Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2012 at 11:37 PM

yours was GRRRREAT!! Congratulations, Debs.

Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 7:59 PM

DEBBIE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Olusegun Arowolo

March 2, 2012 at 5:46 PM

Nice and wonderful piece,Debbie.I love the way you arranged your words and the picture you added added more glamor to your poem....Kudos to you my dear friend...And thanks for your help.you are just ...UNIQUE..

Samual Ronthorpe

March 2, 2012 at 4:23 PM

Debbie, wonderful work. I like the photo, thats a nice touch. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Nette Onclaud

March 2, 2012 at 9:59 AM

music to my ears, debbie.. super congrats! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 2, 2012 at 9:33 AM

va va va voom Debbie .. congrats on a sultry piece of exquisite beauty luv.. those keys will heighten the mood every time..oh..

Kash Poet

March 2, 2012 at 7:07 AM

Congrats Debi on your win.Loved it!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 2, 2012 at 5:54 AM

Congratulations Debbie nice picture as well xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 2, 2012 at 5:40 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2012 at 3:32 PM

Ok, now you are showing off your skill that you showed us in the blog. How COOL is this,you are representing the inspiration of your poem right above your lovely write. Surely a winner!