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Contest-J With Four Options 8/2/25

Sponsor- Constance La France

I drew a charcoal rendering of your face on the cave wall of my mind You were taken from me long ago I visit this cave when I am asleep When the world is still and I am alone and I crawl into my mind's lonely realm I carry a lantern burning from memories of you To light the way to the jewels of our days and poetic parchments I gave to your heart containing the written words of our love Here in the shadows, I cry each night beneath my charcoal rendering drawn from memory When you vanished from Earth, you merged with my soul remembering the days we had I raise my lantern as high as I need I'll stay as long as I can, So I may see your face once again

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Date: 8/2/2025 5:28:00 PM
a beautifully written poem, sir. I was totally engaged as I read your poem identifying with the sadness. I especially liked these lines, for they resonated deeply with me: When you vanished from Earth, you merged with my soul remembering the days we had I raise my lantern as high as I need I'll stay as long as I can, So I may see your face once again Well penned! Sara
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Date: 8/2/2025 12:25:00 PM
- A dream so beautiful yet so sad... the memories live in your heart - Best wishes in the contest, Frederic :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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