The Journey Within

I drew a charcoal rendering
      of your face
on the cave wall of my mind
You were taken from me long ago
I visit this cave when I am asleep
When the world is still and I am alone
and I crawl into my mind's lonely realm
      I carry a lantern
        burning from memories of you
To light the way to the jewels of our days
      and poetic parchments I gave to your heart
containing the written words of our love
Here in the shadows, I cry each night
beneath my charcoal rendering
      drawn from memory
When you vanished from Earth, you merged with my soul
      remembering the days we had
I raise my lantern as high as I need
      I'll stay as long as I can, 
So I may see your face once again
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 5:28 PM
a beautifully written poem, sir. I was totally engaged as I read your poem identifying with the sadness. I especially liked these lines, for they resonated deeply with me: When you vanished from Earth, you merged with my soul remembering the days we had I raise my lantern as high as I need I'll stay as long as I can, So I may see your face once again Well penned! Sara
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:25 PM
- A dream so beautiful yet so sad... the memories live in your heart - Best wishes in the contest, Frederic :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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