The Journey To the Cosmic Beyond

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Author`s Notes: This is a new Canzone poem that my wife, Ingrid, and I had just finished today on June 17, 2018. This is a theme we had both been in discussion about over the last couple of weeks, and with great detail and thought. We both do feel that the reader should find the journey we speak of to the Cosmic Beyond to be one of great interest. This poem and its progressive message speaks for itself. Cheers and Best Wishes!! Gary Bateman and Ingrid Krukenberg-Bateman

The Journey to the Cosmic Beyond

Life
God’s divine spark heralds our mortal presence on this Earth,
Whilst angels sing their mystic paeans to our cosmic rebirth.
The soul’s constant transformation transcends all mortality,
As it brings each of us closer to God’s vision of immortality.
Life should be lived by all with due passion and sincere love,
As we mortals reflect on Life’s true meaning in Heaven above. 
This mortal coil defines our self-existence in this human strife!
   
Death
Death bringeth a spiritual transition at the end of our mortal days, 
And its reality frees our souls to find their destiny in many ways.
After death our souls can now seek out their cosmic connections,
And return to God’s Kingdom to share their earth-life reflections.
Death itself should never be feared but embraced at the end of life,
For our souls shall findeth spiritual freedom and opportunities rife.
With death comes a new beginning as our souls ascend into eternity!

Hell
This spiritual possibility exists for those souls with big debts to pay,
As earthly sins come home to roost, and Lucifer shall have his way!
Redemption’s possible for some souls with minor mortal infractions,
Whilst others reside here forever as Dante smiles at their sad reactions! 
His Inferno is truly horrid for those who enter in shall forfeit all hope,
As Lucifer turns a literary portrayal into a reality as all souls must cope! 
Hell’s that darkest cosmic state of mind where things macabre rule all!

Heaven
One’s holy place in the realm of the “Pearly Gates” is the true intention
Of souls who profer their goodness but reckon not with God’s objection!
Others shall ascend here for good deeds done to help those in real need,
Whilst others with hidden warts and all shall be revealed for their greed!
Despite mortal flaws, Heaven’s the place for many who strive their best
In God’s eyes and realize the reality of who they are at end of their quest!
God’s judgment may oft be merciful yet must never be taken for granted! 

Cosmic Beyond
Life, Death, Hell, and Heaven from the view of Mother Earth are refined
By how mortals interpret biblical scripture with holy deliverance in mind. 
Yet as souls make their way to God’s heavenly realm they may surely see,
More from God’s infinite creation of the universe and who they are to be!
God’s wish may be for us to discover, learn and experience as we move on,
With spiritual love and appreciation of His creations in the Cosmic Beyond!
The Cosmic Beyond knows no astral borders, is limitless, and is eternity!

Gary Bateman and Ingrid Krukenberg-Bateman
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – June 17, 2018
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/20/2018 7:12:00 AM
both your pens spark beautifully together in this delightful painting i pray you both have a blessed week ahead
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/20/2018 1:12:00 PM
Many Thanks Liam Mate on behalf of both Ingrid and me!! We are both very pleased that you liked our Canzone poem here on the Cosmic Beyond. (I do think, on balance, the "Hell" will be a very busy place, as many souls will end up there, and not many will make it out!! LOL!!) Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 6/18/2018 9:05:00 AM
- An excellent writing, Ingrid and Gary :) - A spiritual Cosmic Beyond that opens gates and people's hearts - (Life's circle - from egg to chicken and much more) - The cycle of birth, death and rebirth, an interesting theme ... skillfully written :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/19/2018 6:00:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, On behalf of both Ingrid and I -- we both appreciate your read of our latest co-write here, and for most gracious comments. We are both very pleased that you liked our final product here. Getting the words right with this one was very important to the both of us. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 6/18/2018 8:14:00 AM
Life and death, hell and heaven, mortality and immortality, here and the beyond all artfully displayed before our spirituality by you mein freund und deine frau Ingrid. Es ist wunderbar! Exceptional writing with deep spiritual insight!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/19/2018 5:57:00 PM
Hallo Herr Professor, Vielen Dank von Ingrid und ich!! Dieses Gedicht wirklich viel Arbeit war. Es dauert viel Zeit auch and tief nachdenken!! But despite the all of the work and contemplation, Ingrid and I were very pleased with the final product and outcome. Always our distinct pleasure to hear from you Demetrios!! Best, Gary and Ingrid
Date: 6/17/2018 2:10:00 PM
A brilliant write Gary and Ingrid, you've covered our mortal existence then on to our spiritual one and beyond, an enjoyable read. Tom.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/18/2018 6:33:00 AM
Hello Tom, Great to hear from you about our collaborated poem here. Ingrid and I are very pleased that you enjoyed the read and the narrative message of this rather complex theme. We also learn a lot too when we further develop themes of this nature. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 6/17/2018 11:29:00 AM
A great collaborative Canzone Gary and Ingrid... You have given a poetic insight to different dimensions...
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/17/2018 11:59:00 AM
Many Thanks Silent One!! We are both very pleased to hear from you, and for you to be the first one to comment on our most recent collaboration here. We are very glad you liked it. Best Wishes for both of us!! Cheers, Gary
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