Laura Mckenzie Poet Rhyme

The Journey of Wind

I feel the vigor in your power
Your gusts, you’re tower

Such beauty yet such ruin all in your mighty hands
A blessing on a hot day relieving, fanned
 
Whisking cool breezes across the plains
You’re calling out, now howling freedom no doubt 

Caressing my face tickling my hair
As it dances in the air

Your lift carries seeds to places you plan
All in your dancing wind strands

You fill sails on boats traveling in motion 
You put flight to birds skimming the ocean 

What would it be without your movement in the trees?
What is your purpose to movement if seized ?

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Judy Riley January 5, 2009 at 9:35 AM Good rhyme and pictures painted in words, nice use of couplets, a good poem to read. I feel as I would love to feel the wind on my face, thanks for sharing. I am new on this site, Judy Riley

Juliane Thomas December 31, 2008 at 6:51 AM I love the wind in all of the aspects that you described in this poem. Wind is my favorite element, and can manifest in so many different ways! As you say, "What would it be without your movement in the trees?" The air would be empty indeed without the wind! Thank you so much for your comments on my poem "'Wild Child' Wind" ...Don't worry...No problem about the name mix-up :) Take care, and have a Happy New Year! ~Juliane

Mc Mc December 31, 2008 at 2:16 AM You fill sails on boats traveling in motion You put flight to birds skimming the ocean wow loved the images, Laura!! gem

Heidie Buys December 29, 2008 at 8:21 AM So beautifully descriptive with just a touch of contemplation. Very well done. Love Heidie

Mary Duhart December 23, 2008 at 6:47 AM Beautifully writen. I can feel the wind as I read this lovely piece. Great write.

Sharon Winter December 22, 2008 at 4:41 PM Hi Laura. Hope this is a sign you are feeling much better. Quite a beautiful write about a most needed and inspiring element of nature. Well done! Love, shar

Christopher Higgins December 22, 2008 at 11:21 AM Beautifully moving poem that sways with elegance. You have written the piece very well. Great job!