The Journey of a Tear

It often trickles slowly, timid and shy
From the inner eyelid of a song
Or down the cheek of a distant mountain
A sunset rising beyond the hill, or moonlight on the window sill
A rose in bloom…a drop of dew…so tiny, sweet and beautiful
It fills a cup with voiceless wonder, and deep affection
It languishes softly…with wild abandonment
And will not be tamed 

But, another kind is rooted deep
Buried where the light can’t reach
The anguish of the world falls on it’s cheek
It dwells beside the hopeless shore
Until thundering waves can't be ignored
The first single tear drifts down the walls
Into the shadowy tide of a river, longing
Bleeding old wounds, through all the old hurts
Looking for a place to hide
The sky above the earth will darken
Behind a leaden, lumpy cloud bank
Now the day has puckered up a bottom lip
Round spattering tears are warm
Prelude to the storm
The day will weep
Until it falls asleep





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For the One Silver Tear Contest: 7/26/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Carrillo Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 7:42 PM
This is very beautiful and it has great imagination. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Collins Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Dear Carrie - I am so happy to have found your poetry. A multitude of feelings and images comes through your words. Take many bows. love, Kathy
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Beautiful and moving Carrie, very well written. - Wish you luck in contest! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Murray Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Incredible and Wowie. I really loved the poignant way you described "tears" Luvin' it Anne
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 11:42 AM
WOWOWOW. this is magnificent, Carrie. Best one yet - in my book!!!
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Ohh....wow!!You brought tears to my eyes Carrie...such a heartfelt poem...a Fav!
Aldea Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 7:40 PM
Oh.. its so beautiful a heart touching line.., Regards, Cheryl
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Absolutely beautiful Carrie! Every line is unique. I'll be visiting your blog very soon. You made my day. Appreciate ya'
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