The Journey (Motto)

Like the tortoise, be gentle, take small steps – go far

Inspired by Brian Strand's  (Motto/Monuku) contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 28, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Made me chuckle at the little tortoises legs, truthfull statement if ever i heard one, excellent Krista>>James
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July 26, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Good message in this poem. And, sometimes it is just one step at a time. Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing. Karen
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July 26, 2009 at 1:07 AM
So true Krista.Rgds Brian
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July 25, 2009 at 2:19 AM
A very well written monoku possessing very sage advice. Krista, it is a pleasure to have read for you and I thank you for your welcome comments on my poem. God Bless, always, Adell
Meadows Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 11:32 AM
this is a good monuku. chek out some of my poems
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