The Journey

It slams
And impacted instantly
Hoarded like gold
The rib to my side
Aching in its stirrups like Adam
Swallowing hard and dispersing
A fickle attempt to blend into the walls
And edge a conquest, those beautiful red planes
Smashed. A man half ferocious, half dead
His Mussolini smile and little left of his gait

Detonation
Like canaries in deep mines, we slip from our perches
Slowly we breathe, heavy paper bags
Illuminating like so many zeppelins
The thick carbon smell hanging like dust
Free to roam, though essentially just cattle
Inexorable we branch and explode ourselves
Feeling like Eve as the bell chimes
A forceful amputation, it felt like abortion
Settled and quiet and then blown to the stars

Days snapping
Like matches, struck then useless
Emerging half a world away and ages older
Renewed in my old age and wiped
Pure by the smoke and the bombs
Precious as diamonds and pure as an infant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/19/2009 9:46:00 AM
Miss you, Bugsy =[
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:58:00 PM
Ladybug! If you're on get on yahoo!
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:58:00 PM
There are so many amazing phrases in this... "Aching in its stirrups like Adam" "Free to roam, though essentially just cattle" "settled and quiet and then blown to the stars" I love it. Absolutely gorgeous, dear Bugsy. Miss you. KCOG =]
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Date: 8/11/2009 10:47:00 AM
Good afternoon Nathaniel. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 5:38:00 AM
I like the days snapping like matches. Nicely written. Sara
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:31:00 AM
You have well described our journey through life and the obstacles we face. As we get older, we do feel a sense of renewal as we accept the reality of things we cannot change and learn to concentrate on those we can. Excellent write, Nathaniel! Love, Carolyn
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