The Journey
The Journey
The journey had been long,
the path had been narrow,
the afternoon was shortening
and my destination crept closer.
I walked on.
The path still strolled ahead of me
and no matter how fast I travelled -
that fact never altered.
I moved off now as clouds bundled above,
an acting audience to my every step,
perhaps comparing my journey,
and what was to come,
to past travellers?
The path now smoothed around a corner
and hills suddenly reared to mountains,
mountains that soared and towered
like gigantic, muscled creatures.
And there, sitting at the base of these verdant giants,
sat the house, alone and seemingly lonely!
The path now was bored and wandered off
as I ambled on towards my destination
while the house winked with lucent whiteness
and a spark of red - offered a door.
I drew closer distracted as I noted smoke
like a long, thin, grey snake
slithering out of a little finger of chimney.
I watched entertained as it twisted, thinned and slithered on
then close behind another serpent of smoke
slowly wriggled upwards and wafted away.
My thoughts now turned to trying to sense the house,
sense its emotion, sense its mood
when suddenly the spark of red…. scraped slowly open
and a worn shoe with woollen hand edged into view!
They both stopped as if hesitating, knowing their place,
allowing the mountains to move closer, to loom down...
and a distant memory now shivered my spine.
Ian Souter
Copyright © Ian Souter | Year Posted 2024
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