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The Job

Day break, coffee drunk click click computer typing ring coversation Mid Day, coffee drunk sleepy sales meeting hard boss numbers low always End of business day tunnel vision setting in engine sweet music

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/16/2011 6:15:00 AM
Nice multiple Senryu with continuity on The Job, Tommy
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:55:00 PM
Nice writings, but these are more like senryu entries than haiku. Nevertheless, they are good.
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:45:00 PM
Nice expressions you have penned on The job, Tommy
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:16:00 PM
I bet you live for that sweet music, Tommy. That is 9 to 5 all right!
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:08:00 PM
i felt as to rush on words to make it fun but at the ending it's like finally going home after a day at work, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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