Tommy Dorsey Poet Senryu

The Job

Day break, coffee drunk
   click click computer typing
     ring coversation

Mid Day, coffee drunk
    sleepy sales meeting hard boss
       numbers low always

End of business day
     tunnel vision setting in
        engine sweet music

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Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 6:15 AM Nice multiple Senryu with continuity on The Job, Tommy

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 6:55 PM Nice writings, but these are more like senryu entries than haiku. Nevertheless, they are good.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 15, 2011 at 6:45 PM Nice expressions you have penned on The job, Tommy

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2011 at 6:16 PM I bet you live for that sweet music, Tommy. That is 9 to 5 all right!

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2011 at 2:08 PM i felt as to rush on words to make it fun but at the ending it's like finally going home after a day at work, enjoyed your write,..p.d.