The Jester Premiere Contest Winner

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THE JESTER Jester jingles with madcap medusa-bells, dressed in melodic-motley uniform. A sea of foamy frills frame the famed renaissance storyteller, a creature feature of phantasm for frightened children. His ghost-white face with comedic war paint. Highly educated, acts the fool, preaching to the pompadour. Folly finds the frolicking ear of the entertained king, even at the news of sinking ships. The king’s delighted, as balls lollygag around his throne room, and pins dance before his eyes. Mesmerized, hypnotized, spirals spry and smiling. Claps his cacophonous hands. The puppet court amplifies the sound. The buffoon’s very wise, buried behind his makeup. His strings control the crown. Royally screws the court with tasteless remarks and they bow over in laughter. In the backroom formulates his investment plan. Jester jingles, of drama and lies, of liberties and surprise. 8/3/2017
Kai Neumann’s Jester Contest 1st Place

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Date: 11/11/2020 11:33:00 AM
Hi, Kim! I got to say, uniquely penned together, and I enjoyed reading this from my email. I had to come comment on a well-penned and inked out. And love the first-place win as well. Best of Wishes, William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, William and yes, you can share it. I’m honored.
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 11/11/2020 11:36:00 AM
P.S. I'd like to feature this work, if I may, on my website? I was inspired by this, Kim. Thank you, too!
Date: 11/1/2019 4:13:00 PM
Bravo on your gold medal win, Kim. Superbly penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Line! I thought you might enjoy it :)
Date: 12/23/2018 5:44:00 AM
Very well composed. Enjoyed reading this colorful piece!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2018 12:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Valerie!
Date: 9/18/2017 6:26:00 PM
Ahhh, court intrigue, I enjoyed your historical tale Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, James!
Date: 9/1/2017 2:42:00 PM
How wonderfully remarkable The way you lifted the veil on this pale face Truly deserved First place!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Donna! xx
Date: 8/29/2017 6:44:00 PM
Delightful! I love poetry about this century and you painted the perfect picture of all the players here.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2017 7:44:00 PM
Thanks, Gayle!
Date: 8/28/2017 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations of your deserved win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Adeyemi!
Date: 8/21/2017 7:53:00 PM
Back to Congratulate on your win, Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 8/20/2017 5:57:00 PM
Kim, a hearty congratulations on your top-winning poem, 'The Jester.' Hugs, Sonia.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Sonia!
Date: 8/20/2017 12:32:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your well-deserved top win with this lively, creative, rollicking piece. Great description of the jester and his ability to insult people while making them laugh! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice!
Date: 8/20/2017 7:33:00 AM
Congrats on you 1st place win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2017 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Dale!
Date: 8/4/2017 9:16:00 PM
You painted a perfect picture of a court jester. Good Luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2017 11:21:00 AM
Thanks, Alesia!
Date: 8/4/2017 5:21:00 PM
Very well done, Kim, I love the story and drama you have created.. good luck in the contest ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Date: 8/3/2017 11:34:00 AM
Oh, this is a winner Kim! Wonderful use of consonance throughout. I really enjoyed this. Fave! -- Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Dean!
Date: 8/3/2017 10:54:00 AM
Perfect! You drew a great picture of the court jester. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Agnes!
Date: 8/3/2017 8:36:00 AM
I love your version of the Jester...great write my friend...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks very much!
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